Hi Everyone, I am looking for a little bit of help from any WWI experts who might be out there. Reason being, I am completing an article for publication (soon!) on the Whitelaw family of Briagolong, who had six brothers enlist for WWI - three were KIA in France and one died of wounds soon after return. Several also served at Gallipoli. I have most of the details, dates etc, but I am no military historian. So what I am really after is anyone who would be prepared to read the draft article for me (it should be finished in a couple of hours), and point out to me any glaring contextural stuff/interpretive stuff I have missed. If anyone would be able to read the article, which I would send as an e-mail attachment, and make comment, please drop me an e-mail offlist at kapana@netspace.net.au Unfortunately this is a love job, so much as I would love to be able to offer an editing fee - I can't. But I can promise to acknowledge and send a copy of the final article. Thanks! Linda